OK, you are almost there. Replace the .1 cap on your Presence control - do not use a cheap-arse cap here - and recheck all connections to this pot from the 10K resistor to the Presence control ground. Copy the Kelly pics, BTW.
Finally, if this is no help, your split load resistor network from the Komet circuit may be fubar. Are you sure you did this correctly? If the Presence control is not your problem, this is where I would go next. You may have created a home for some parasitic oscillation here. Its not really clear how well you executed this circuit from your photos but since you are hybreding things this could be a problem area. Basically anything out of the ordinary needs to be looked at if your problem continues.
FWIW, sometimes it is best to build anything, whatever it might be, and add the extras onto it. This is especially true if you are building a high gain circuit I think. But I get the go-4-it attitude, sometimes it works.
So in other words, if all else fails, maybe you should remove the additions, confirm stability, and try adding the bells and whistles then?
Anyway, best of luck.
Most people stall out when fixing a mistake that they've made. Why?